2015年2月28日雅思写作范文：Some students take one year off between finishing school and going to university, i

2015年2月28日雅思写作范文：Some students take one year off between finishing school and going to university, in order to travel or to work. Do you think advantages outweigh disadvantages?

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It is quite common these days for young people in many countries to have a break from studying after graduating from high school.The trend is not restricted to rich students who have the money to travel, but is also evident among poorer students who choose to work and become economically independent for a period of time. 开头段简洁不拖沓。另外，发现没有，作者并没有在开头表立场哦!

The reasons for this trend may involve the recognition that a young adult who passes directly from school to university is rather restricted in terms of general knowledge and experience of the world.By contrast, those who have spent some time earning a living or traveling to other places, have a broader view of life and better personal resources to draw on.(对比论证，非常实用的论证方法!) They tend to be more independent, which is a very important factor in academic study and research, as well as giving them an advantage in terms of coping with the challenges of student life.(此支撑句是多么好用啊!基本任何跟教育或年轻人相关的话题都可以用到这个论据。人家的长句写起来一点不绕，读起来都是大白话，很顺畅啊!另外，in terms of 果然是受阅卷者青睐的好词儿，全段一共三句话，该词出现两次，要不要学习一下它的用法?)

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An increasing number of students choose to spend one year travelling or working before going to university after they graduate from high schools. Although students can benefit a lot from the experiences in a gap year, its drawbacks cannot be ignored.

On prominent advantage of experiencing a gap year is that it helps students to accumulate working experience and have a clear perspective of career development. High schools enphasise academic development, which often makes students perplexed when they decide to choose a major in university. If an opportunity can be provided for them to participate in social activities, they will probably be more certain about their choice of major and work. In addition, working or traveling contributes to broadening students’ horizons and enriching their life. They need to live independently and communicate with people from different cultural backgrounds, which is of great value to both their life and work in the future.

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