2018年2月1日雅思写作范文：Figures show that some countries have an ever-increasing proportion of the populatio

2018年2月1日雅思写作范文：Figures show that some countries have an ever-increasing proportion of the population who are aged 15 or younger.What do you are the current and future effects of this trend for those countries?

范文1：

It is true that a stable proportion of the population of all ages plays a significant role in maintaing the societal development .Yet some countries have witnessed a rise in the number of younger generations ,mostly under 15.

As far as I am concerned , this tendency has widespread repercussions on society currently .To commence with , a growing percentage of young people bring heavy burden on families ,both financially and mentally ,those middle class in particular . No doubt that nowadays every parent desires their children to receive high-quality education ,which invariably requires solid material foundation .But more children mean more pressure ,therefore this phenomenon sadly renders the parents helpless.

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范文2：

The recent years have witnessed (拟人的手法) an increasing proportion of people aged around 15 in many counties, which has aroused great concern among the public. This essay will make a further investigation into the effects in the short run as well as in the long run.

One of the immediate effects is enormous pressure of peer competition. As is known to all, parents tend to (tend to可以代替颇具民族风的always, often) send their children to renowned schools for the sake of (老外最爱的短语之一=in order to get) outstanding academic performance and admirable personalities. These institutes, nevertheless, are very critical about their candidates, which would also apply strict screening to the applicants。 The ever increasing number of children of school age, therefore (插入语), means that they are exposed to more fierce competition than ever before because of the limited number of top schools. In many cases, the heavy burden of school work and exams would result in tremendous tension, which influences them as physically as mentally.

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