2013年12月21日雅思小作文范文:The charts below show the information of graduates in an advertising company in 1990 and 2010.
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写作指导:
1. 观察图表,确定写作主要时态为过去时。
2. 比较图表信息,将特征数据作出标记并进行逻辑上的关联,如介绍1990年的文科硕士雇员比重最大,可与文科博士(比重最小)或者理科硕士(紧随其后)进行比较。
3. 根据上述方法,不同教育程度的雇员可以进行归纳分组,依此进行段落划分;写作时应注意句式的变化。
4. 结尾段总结时,可概括为2010年本科文凭持有者的雇员较多,与博士文凭的雇员有明显差异。
参考范文:
The two pie charts compare educational attainment of employees in an advertising company in two separate years, 1990 and 2010. It is evident that, in both years, PhD degree holders who specialized in arts had the lowest share of employment.
In 1990, graduates with Master of Arts (MA) degree accounted for the largest proportion, followed by those awarded Master of Science degree (Msc). Specifically, MA employees took an initial share of 27% before declining sharply to only 10% in 2010. In comparison, the figure of MSc employees remained stagnant (20%) in the given period.。。。。余下范文省略!
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