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2019年3月9日雅思写作范文:As part of education, students should spend a period of time studying and living in

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2019年3月9日雅思写作范文:As part of education, students should spend a period of time studying and living in a different country to learn its language and culture. To what extent do you agree or disagree?作为教育的一部分,学生应该花一段时间学习和生活在一个不同的国家,学习其语言和文化。

2019年3月9日雅思写作范文:As part of education, students should spend a period of time studying and living in a different country to learn its language and culture. To what extent do you agree or disagree?作为教育的一部分,学生应该花一段时间学习和生活在一个不同的国家,学习其语言和文化。

解题思路:

陷阱:“ as a part of education, 所以这个表达就限定住了出国这件事情是从教育的角度来考虑的,所以和其他的考虑因素都无关 ”,可千万别这么想呀!

这道题目的正确思路可以是:

开头段:我不完全同意为了学习语言和文化就去到别的国家学习和居住

分论点1: 在海外学习有更好的语言环境。

分论点2: 居住在海外可以更加深入的了解当地文化

让步段:在海外居住和学习是很多家庭所负担不起的

总结段:学生和家长需要量力而行,不能盲目出国

2019年3月9日雅思写作范文如下:

段一:

开头段第一句使用下定义法,解释一下教育的作用

第二句话引入话题,很多家长会让孩子们出国学习

第三句话给出个人观点(已经强调一万遍了,开头段一定要有观点)

The main role of education is to satisfy one’s ambition by passing sufficient knowledge and practical skills to those individuals, which may provide them with a more promising future. With the improvement of economic condition, many parents are sending their kids to foreign counties to enjoy a better environment that can help them to master a second language and local culture. In my opinion, I partly agree with such conduct.

翻译:

(教育的目的就是通过传授足够的知识和实践技能给人们从而让他们去满足个人的野心,这也许能够给他们提供一个非常美好的未来。随着经济水平的提高,很多家长会把他们的孩子送到国外去享受一个更好的学习环境,去帮助他们学习一门第二外语以及当地的文化。在我看来,我不完全同意这样的做法。)

段二:

First, studying aboard means a more satisfying language environment. Learning a new language require massive practice like speaking, reading and writing, which is the exact factor that students cannot easily acquire locally. Therefore, Monotonous and difficult, the learning of the second language could be extremely troublesome for many under-aged kids. However, students could have way more opportunity to put what they have learnt into practice if they study aboard, which may improve the learning efficiency to a much higher extent.

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