2019年7月27日雅思写作范文:Some people give their children everything that their children ask for or they want to.Is this good for children?What could be the consequences for these children when they grow up?
参考论点:
part 1:溺爱不好。部分父母认为to满足孩子需求is to给他们最好的爱。
1. 父母be overwhelmed with工作,很少陪伴。觉得给孩子最好的物质条件并且顺着孩子心意,是爱他们。
2.也有些父母,出于尊重,支持孩子的兴趣爱好,如支持学舞蹈,支持创业。但大多数孩子distinguishing ability不足,想要玩游戏,而spoil他们会造成沉迷,due to which浪费学习的光阴。甚至gambling,暴力,drug-using等,一定不能允许。
part 2:对孩子们未来造成undesirable/irrevocable effects.
1.excessively的物质如小到零食和玩具,大到电子产品等全部满足,可能造成compare unrealistically和不正常消费观money-oriented value,长大后甚至经济犯罪。而且过多消费也造成浪费。
2.完全顺从孩子,让孩子变得self-centered,性格自私,甚至,不尊重别人,不遵守学校规则等规则。不体谅别人,不换位思考,不利于人际交往。尤其职场不利于合作。
3.依赖父母,身心都不够独立。有些人长大后都无法生活自理。遇到挫折后,沮丧甚至抑郁。相比之下,生活和社会中的问题需要自己解决,压力需要自己承受。
因此,父母一味的满足孩子的需求反而有害。
雅思写作范文如下:
It is not unusual to find that some parents spoil their children by satisfying whatever they ask .As for me,this is not a good parenting style,and it has a range of negative influences on their children in the long term.
While there is no doubt that parents show a great deal of love to their offspring,over-indulgence is definitely not good for children.Actually,parenting is based on loving children rather than spoiling them. If parents want to raise respectful and well-bahaved children,I think a certain kind of discipline is necessary. This is because the little kids would behave with no awareness of boundaries or control.That may explain why spoiled children are on the rise in modern society as plenty of parents are overly permissive.
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