2019年11月16日雅思写作范文：Although family has a great influence on children’s lives

2019年11月16日雅思写作范文：Although family has a great influence on children’s lives, it is influences from outside the home that play a bigger part in their development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

两篇雅思写作范文如下，范文1：

It is believed that external factors influence children’s development in a more significant way than parents. However, I would argue otherwise.

Admittedly, social environment contributes tochildren’sdevelopment. When children receive education in school, teachers have a great effect on their thoughts and behaviors. For instance, a child may grow interested in a certain subject such as drawing because of the instructions and guidance from teachers in class. Children may also be affected by what peers do. It is easy for children to develop similar interests or hobbies when they often hang out with friends in school. However, social influence on a child's growth is limited when compared to familial influence.

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范文2：

Despite the fact that every child’s life is influenced by his or her family, other factors outside the family cannot be ignored, which play a bigger role in a child’s growth. I quite approve of the above view.

Admittedly, parents’ different ways of raising children affect children’s lives physically and psychologically. Furthermore, since the relationships with parents and other family members are unique and critical to children’s social development, family characteristics and children’s experiences within their families appear to be important to children’s overall development.

However, besides families, young minds need the right combination of care and independence, empowerment and challenge for their development so they can thrive in their lives. It is a well-known fact that teachers are definitely great shapers of children and influence what they will be in the future; consequently, teachers who are able to inspire, support and provide appropriate 

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